DokiDoki Precure Episode 23: Difference between revisions
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Begone from before me! | Begone from before me! | ||
Cure Ace: | Cure Ace: Where were you looking at, I wonder? | ||
Mammo: She's fast! | Mammo: She's fast! | ||
Cure Ace: I'll settle this | Cure Ace: I'll settle this with one blow! | ||
Make up! Love Kiss Rouge! | Make up! Love Kiss Rouge! | ||
I'll make your heart race! | I'll make your heart race! | ||
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Rikka: Mana! | Rikka: Mana! | ||
Cure Ace: | Cure Ace: You think that your tears alone can bring her back? | ||
On your feet now! | |||
This is no time to be | This is no time to be faltering. | ||
Rikka: Hang on a second! | Rikka: Hang on a second! | ||
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Cure Ace: The Five Precure Oaths! | Cure Ace: The Five Precure Oaths! | ||
One of which is, "Those who are Precure always keep | One of which is, "Those who are Precure always keep going with pride and perseverance!"{She says 一つ here, but she's not saying number one, she's saying "One of which is..." The reason why I say that is in later eps, she says 一つ again, but says a different one, meaning that she's not meaning to number them off, but just say (as I already said) that it's just one of the five oaths. --K} | ||
You need to become much stronger. | You need to become much stronger. | ||
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King Selfishe: My poor, poor daughter... | King Selfishe: My poor, poor daughter... | ||
Go to sleep now... | Go to sleep now... | ||
Sleep deeply, and ever so deeply... | |||
Who in blazes is this Cure Ace? | Who in blazes is this Cure Ace? | ||
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Mammo: Gula! | Mammo: Gula! | ||
Ira: They must have been boring worlds | Ira: They must have been boring worlds filled with monkeys or something. | ||
Leva: | Leva: That's quite the sweet mouth you have. {With a kinda, "Look at him, isn't he so precious? Trying to act all big and tough..." vibe, I think. w --K} | ||
Gula: Want me to take a big bite outta your head? | Gula: Want me to take a big bite outta your head? | ||
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Rikka: That smells {\i1}good{\i0}! | Rikka: That smells {\i1}good{\i0}! | ||
Kentarou: | Kentarou: Want a bite? | ||
Rikka + Makoto: Thanks. | Rikka + Makoto: Thanks. | ||
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Kentarou: Did something happen? | Kentarou: Did something happen? | ||
Rikka: Hmm? | Rikka: Hmm? What do you mean? | ||
Kentarou: Mana's not one to mope often. | Kentarou: Mana's not one to mope often. | ||
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Regina was snatched away, and on top of that... | Regina was snatched away, and on top of that... | ||
Davi: Her Lovie was confiscated. | Davi: ...Her Lovie was confiscated. | ||
Rikka: Cure Ace... I wonder exactly who she is, anyway. | Rikka: Cure Ace... I wonder exactly who she is, anyway. | ||
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However, we haven't been able to garner any solid information. | However, we haven't been able to garner any solid information. | ||
Lance: She's quite the | Lance: She's quite the tenacious opponent. | ||
Alice: What's this? | Alice: What's this? | ||
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It's you and me! How's it look?{にてる? here is asking, "How well does the image I have drawn resemble what it's supposed to be?" --K} | It's you and me! How's it look?{にてる? here is asking, "How well does the image I have drawn resemble what it's supposed to be?" --K} | ||
Look! Your randsell fits me perfectly.{I'm good with either "randoseru" or "randsell", but not "ransel" or "backpack", as randoseru has a specific connotation of the Japanese elementary school backpack. --K} | Look! Your randsell fits me perfectly.{I'm good with either "randoseru" or "randsell", but not "ransel" or "backpack", as randoseru has a specific connotation of the Japanese elementary school backpack. --K} | ||
This pillow smells like | This pillow smells like you! | ||
Mana: Regina... | Mana: Regina... | ||
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I'll never forgive you for this!{Flashback to earlier in the episode --K} | I'll never forgive you for this!{Flashback to earlier in the episode --K} | ||
Cheryl: Mana, | Cheryl: Mana, not eating anything's going to be bad for you. | ||
Mana: I don't wanna. | Mana: I don't wanna. | ||
Cheryl: Pull yourself together! | Cheryl: Pull yourself together! | ||
You are one of the legendary | You are one of the legendary Precure! | ||
Mana: Not anymore... | Mana: Not anymore... | ||
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<nounwrap>Mana: Ai-chan, why are you {\i1}here{\i0}? | <nounwrap>Mana: Ai-chan, why are you {\i1}here{\i0}? | ||
Ayumi: | Ayumi: Where else would your little sister be? | ||
Mana: L-Little sister?! | Mana: L-Little sister?! | ||
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Ai-chan: Ai. | Ai-chan: Ai. | ||
Mana cheer | Mana cheer! Cheer! | ||
Mana: Did you come to cheer me up? | Mana: Did you come to cheer me up? | ||
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Mana: The festival certainly is bustling. | Mana: The festival certainly is bustling. | ||
Regina'd probably be really happy to see this... | Regina'd probably be really happy to see this... | ||
Yeah like that'd happen... | Yeah, like that'd happen... | ||
Aguri: How long do you plan to keep sulking? | Aguri: How long do you plan to keep sulking? | ||
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Ai-chan: Kewpie-pie! | Ai-chan: Kewpie-pie! | ||
Aguri: | Aguri: You'll lose the thing you hold most dear if you stay like this, Aida Mana-san. | ||
Male Fans: Can we have your autograph, please? | Male Fans: Can we have your autograph, please? | ||
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Leva: There's no need to hold back... | Leva: There's no need to hold back... | ||
We're gonna | We're gonna help your desires come true. | ||
Gula: Rampage, and unleash the darkness within your heart! | Gula: Rampage, and unleash the darkness within your heart! | ||
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Rosetta + Sword: Yeah. | Rosetta + Sword: Yeah. | ||
Leva: Oh, you | Leva: Oh, aren't you quick to the party! | ||
Cure Sword: Who are you?! | Cure Sword: Who are you?! | ||
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Mana: My head's been so full since Regina left that I was unable to see what was important. | Mana: My head's been so full since Regina left that I was unable to see what was important. | ||
It's not about what's the most important. | |||
I want to protect everyone's happiness! | I just want to protect everyone's happiness! | ||
The smiling faces of my comrades, of Regina, I'll protect them all! | The smiling faces of my comrades, of Regina, I'll protect them all! | ||
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Shikishi Selfishe: Self? | Shikishi Selfishe: Self? | ||
Leva: You | Leva: You still hanging in there? | ||
Cure Sword: There's no way we're giving up! | Cure Sword: There's no way we're giving up! | ||
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One of which is... | One of which is... | ||
Mana: "Those who are Precure always keep | Mana: "Those who are Precure always keep going with pride and perseverance!" | ||
Cure Diamond: | Cure Diamond: Don't tell me... | ||
Aguri: It seems you've recovered your love. | Aguri: It seems you've recovered your love. | ||
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Cure Love: Abundant love, Cure Heart! | Cure Love: Abundant love, Cure Heart! | ||
Cure Heart: Poor, sad, and lovelorn | Cure Heart: Poor, sad, and lovelorn stationery... | ||
I, Cure Heart, will make your heart beat with love again! | I, Cure Heart, will make your heart beat with love again! | ||
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Self! | Self! | ||
Cure Ace: | Cure Ace: You ready? | ||
Cure Heart: You | Cure Heart: You bet! | ||
Cure Ace: Make up! Love Kiss Rouge! | Cure Ace: Make up! Love Kiss Rouge! | ||
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Cure Diamond: Cure Heart! | Cure Diamond: Cure Heart! | ||
Thank goodness, I'm | Thank goodness, I'm so glad! | ||
Cure Heart: Sorry to worry you... | Cure Heart: Sorry to worry you... | ||
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Cure Sword: It's fine, we're just glad your back to your normal cheerful self... | Cure Sword: It's fine, we're just glad your back to your normal cheerful self... | ||
Cure Rosetta: Indeed | Cure Rosetta: Indeed. | ||
Cure Ace: This is no time to be celebrating. | Cure Ace: This is no time to be celebrating. | ||
Your ordeal has only just begun. | Your ordeal has only just begun. | ||
You need to quickly ascend to | You will need to quickly ascend to the stage I am on. | ||
I'll be waiting for you. Adieu! | I'll be waiting for you. Adieu! | ||
Latest revision as of 22:13, 8 July 2015
Translation: Kanmuri
TL complete, ready for timing
Translation
Prologue
Regina: Who are you?!
Cure Ace: Love's trump card, Cure Ace!
{OP}
Part 1
Title: Bring Back the Love! The Five Precure Oaths!
Rikka: Cure... Ace?
Davi: A warrior I've never seen before!
Regina: {\i1}What's with her?{\i0}
{\i1}Just looking at her makes me queasy.{\i0}
Begone from before me!
Cure Ace: Where were you looking at, I wonder?
Mammo: She's fast!
Cure Ace: I'll settle this with one blow!
Make up! Love Kiss Rouge!
I'll make your heart race!
Ace Shot!
Bang!
Mana: Regina!
Regina!
Regina!
Bel: Cure Ace, you said?
I'll remember that name...
Mana: Wait!
Don't take Regina!
Regina...
Regina: Precure...
I'll never forgive you for this!
Precure!
Mana: Regina!
Rikka: Mana!
Cure Ace: You think that your tears alone can bring her back?
On your feet now!
This is no time to be faltering.
Rikka: Hang on a second!
Makoto: You don't understand!
You don't know how much Mana cares for Regina!
Alice: I don't know who you are or where you came from, but I won't permit such an offhand dismissal of Mana's feelings!
Cure Ace: The Five Precure Oaths!
One of which is, "Those who are Precure always keep going with pride and perseverance!"{She says 一つ here, but she's not saying number one, she's saying "One of which is..." The reason why I say that is in later eps, she says 一つ again, but says a different one, meaning that she's not meaning to number them off, but just say (as I already said) that it's just one of the five oaths. --K}
You need to become much stronger.
Mana: I can't...
I can't get any stronger than this...
Cure Ace: I have no choice then.{"You are hereby relieved of command." ;_; --K}
I will hang on to this until you have recovered your love.
Okay? Adieu!
Rikka: W-Wait!
Davi: She's gone...
Mana: I'm sorry, guys...
It's just like she said.
I'm not qualified to be a Precure.
Alice: Mana-chan...
Rikka: It's not your fault!
So please stop crying!
King Selfishe: My poor, poor daughter...
Go to sleep now...
Sleep deeply, and ever so deeply...
Who in blazes is this Cure Ace?
Bel: We do not know.
However, she {\i1}is{\i0} a fearsome opponent.
Leva: Seems like she's more than you can handle, Bel-chan!
Bel: Stop calling me that, Leva!
You guys haven't captured a single world yet, have you?
Gula: We've already wiped out three whole worlds!
Mammo: Gula!
Ira: They must have been boring worlds filled with monkeys or something.
Leva: That's quite the sweet mouth you have. {With a kinda, "Look at him, isn't he so precious? Trying to act all big and tough..." vibe, I think. w --K}
Gula: Want me to take a big bite outta your head?
Ira: Try it if you can!
King Selfishe: Cut it out!
Leva and Gula!
I'm counting on you to exterminate the Precure!
Leva + Gula: Yes sir!
Sign: Ohgai Shopping District Festival
Rikka + Makoto: Hello!
Kentarou + Ayumi: Welcome!
Rikka: That smells {\i1}good{\i0}!
Kentarou: Want a bite?
Rikka + Makoto: Thanks.
Makoto: Umm, how's Mana?
Ayumi: She's been holed up in her room since yesterday, and hasn't eaten a bite.
Makoto: I see...
Kentarou: Did something happen?
Rikka: Hmm? What do you mean?
Kentarou: Mana's not one to mope often.
I'm thinking she probably had a fight with Regina or something.
Rikka: It wasn't exactly a "fight", per se.
Kentarou: Huh?
Makoto: It'll be okay.
Mana's going through some hard times right now, but I'm sure she'll be back to her cheerful self in no time.
Kentarou: That's true.
Mana has some really good friends.
Makoto: Mana's probably depressed.
Raquel: That's not hard to believe.
Regina was snatched away, and on top of that...
Davi: ...Her Lovie was confiscated.
Rikka: Cure Ace... I wonder exactly who she is, anyway.
Alice: About that...
Sebastian: Since she appeared, we've been probing into the whereabouts of Cure Ace.
However, we haven't been able to garner any solid information.
Lance: She's quite the tenacious opponent.
Alice: What's this?
It's Mana-chan's grandfather.
Rikka + Alice + Makoto: Hello!
Grandfather: Oh, hello.
Rikka: What's up with those boxes?
Grandfather: There's a flea market at the festival.
Mana promised to help out, but...
Rikka: We'd love to help out, if that's okay.
Grandfather: Really?
Alice: Of course!
Makoto: Um... I'll help out, too.
Welcome!
Red shirt girl: I'll take this, Makopi!
Makoto: 100 yen please.
Light green shirt girl: We're rooting for you!
Yellow shirt boy: Keep up the good work!
Makoto: Thank you.
Rikka: Aren't they kind of missing the point?
Alice: I see no problem, as it's attracting a lively crowd.
Grandpa: That's right, things get lively when people gather together.
And a lively town is a happy town.
Alice: We should do our best to liven things up in Mana's place.
Rikka: You're right.
Regina: Mana... Mana!
It's you and me! How's it look?{にてる? here is asking, "How well does the image I have drawn resemble what it's supposed to be?" --K}
Look! Your randsell fits me perfectly.{I'm good with either "randoseru" or "randsell", but not "ransel" or "backpack", as randoseru has a specific connotation of the Japanese elementary school backpack. --K}
This pillow smells like you!
Mana: Regina...
Regina: Precure...
I'll never forgive you for this!{Flashback to earlier in the episode --K}
Cheryl: Mana, not eating anything's going to be bad for you.
Mana: I don't wanna.
Cheryl: Pull yourself together!
You are one of the legendary Precure!
Mana: Not anymore...
Ai-chan: Kewpietwump!
Mana: Wh-What?!
What was that just now?
Yes?
Ayumi: It's kinda busy in the kitchen, so can you watch Ai-chan for a bit?{表 meaning "the back", but "the back" of a restaurant is the kitchen, so that's why I TLed it as such. --K}
Ai-chan: Kewpie!
Mana: Whaaaaa-?
{Eyecatch}
Part 2
Mana: Ai-chan, why are you {\i1}here{\i0}?
Ayumi: Where else would your little sister be?
Mana: L-Little sister?!
Ayumi: Okay, thanks.
Cheryl: What's going on?
Mana: Well... that magic from earlier probably planted the idea in her head that she's my little sister.
Cheryl: Whaaa-?
Ai-chan: Mana...
Mana: Hmm? Ai-chan, did you just say my name?
Ai-chan: Ai-chan, Mana, togedder!{Trying to imitate the baby talk here with "togedder". --K}
Mana: Ai-chan!
Ai-chan: Yah!
Mana: Hmm?
A Care Lovie?
You want me to use this?
Ai-chan: Ai.
Mana cheer! Cheer!
Mana: Did you come to cheer me up?
Ai-chan: Ai!
Mana: Ai-chan!
You're taking care of {\i1}me{\10}.
Thank you, Ai-chan.
Mana: The festival certainly is bustling.
Regina'd probably be really happy to see this...
Yeah, like that'd happen...
Aguri: How long do you plan to keep sulking?
Ai-chan: Kewpie!
Mana: Ah! Ai-chan, wait!
Ai-chan: Kewpie-pie!
Aguri: You'll lose the thing you hold most dear if you stay like this, Aida Mana-san.
Male Fans: Can we have your autograph, please?
DB: Sorry, but today's not an official appearance, so no autographs.
Male Fans: Aw, man...
Shorter Male Fan: Oh well.
Taller Male Fan: At least we got to see Makopi in person.
Leva: There's no need to hold back...
We're gonna help your desires come true.
Gula: Rampage, and unleash the darkness within your heart!
Selfishe: Selfishe!
Marker Selfishe: Give us...
Shikishi Selfishe: Your autograph!{I switched these two lines around because it's more natural in English --K}
Sebastian: Everyone evacuate!
Makoto: Let's go, girls!
3 Girls: Precure Love Link!
3 Mascots: L O V E
Cure Diamond: We'll do what we can in her place, since Mana can't transform.
Rosetta + Sword: Yeah.
Leva: Oh, aren't you quick to the party!
Cure Sword: Who are you?!
Leva: I'm Leva.
Gula: I'm Gula.
Leva: Pleased to make your acquaintance.
Gula: I'll gobble you up if you're not watching.
Shikishi Selfishe: Give us...
Marker Selfishe: Your autograph!
Selfishe: Self self self...
Mana: You're...
Cheryl: Mana, there's a dark heartbeat!
Sword: Sparkle Sword has no effect!
Selfishe: Self self self...
Leva: It's time to end this...{Said over top of the previous line --K}
Mana: Let's go find the others, Cheryl.
Cheryl: But you can't transform!
Mana: I'm still going.
Thank you very much.
Aguri: Huh?
Mana: My head's been so full since Regina left that I was unable to see what was important.
It's not about what's the most important.
I just want to protect everyone's happiness!
The smiling faces of my comrades, of Regina, I'll protect them all!
Ai-chan: Kewpie!
Marker Selfishe: Give us...
Shikishi Selfishe: Your autograph!
Self self self...
Leva: You've made quite a nice fish print, or rather, Cure print.{魚拓 -- From some light research, gyotaku seems to be a loanword used in the art community for these prints. However, our audience likely don't have that kind of background, and using it as a loanword instead of translating it wouldn't lend itself to the pun Leva's making, so it was translated as "fish print". --K}
Shikishi Selfishe: Self?
Leva: You still hanging in there?
Cure Sword: There's no way we're giving up!
Cure Rosetta: We'll put in Mana's share too of protecting this town!
Cure Diamond: And everyone's happiness! {Yes, there's an "And" at the beginning of the sentence, that's because it's really a continuation of Rosetta's sentence. The verb "protect" in Rosetta's line above is actually implied in hers and stated in Rikka's. People completing each others sentences is annoying to TL, w. --K}
Leva: How dull...
Marker Selfishe: Selfishe!
Self!
Mana: HOLD ON JUST A MINUTE!{Yes, CAPS because Mana is yelling so hard that the force of her voice knocks the selfishe back, w. --K}
Cure Diamond: Mana!
Cure Rosetta: You shouldn't have come!
Cure Sword: You can't transform!
Mana: I'm not running away any longer!
I will fight to protect those dear to me!
Marker Selfishe: Selfishe!
Mana: Is that all you've got?!
Shikishi Selfishe:{Sputters}What're you doing?!
Marker Selfishe: What's your deal?
Shikishi Selfishe: You want a piece of me?!
Marker Selfishe: Bring it on!
Mana: Hah!
Cure Diamond: Nice work!
Cure Rosetta: Amazing as usual, Mana-chan.
Ai-chan: Ai!
Cure Sword: Mana...
Aguri: Well done, Aida Mana.
Or rather, Cure Heart!
The Five Precure Oaths!
One of which is...
Mana: "Those who are Precure always keep going with pride and perseverance!"
Cure Diamond: Don't tell me...
Aguri: It seems you've recovered your love.
Now, let's fight together!
Mana: Yeah!
Cheryl: Cheryl!
Mana: Precure Love Link!
Cheryl: L O V E
Cure Love: Abundant love, Cure Heart!
Cure Heart: Poor, sad, and lovelorn stationery...
I, Cure Heart, will make your heart beat with love again!
Cure Diamond: Cure Heart!
Leva: Make her face as black as the others'!
Aguri: Can you really do that, I wonder?
Selfishe: Self?
Aguri: Let's go, Ai-chan!
Ai-chan: Kewpie!
Aguri: Precure Dress Up!
Ai-chan: Kewpietwump!
Cure Ace: Love's trump card, Cure Ace!
Beauty is the testament of justice.
I'll shoot straight through your heart with a single wink!
Cure Diamond: Whaaa-!?
Cure Ace: Let's go!
Cure Heart: Right!
Shikishi Selfishe: Give us...
Marker Selfishe: Your autograph! Your autograph!
Self?
Self... Self!
Self!
Cure Ace: You ready?
Cure Heart: You bet!
Cure Ace: Make up! Love Kiss Rouge!
I'll make your heart race!
Ace Shot!
Bang!
Shikishi Selfishe: Love! Love Loooooove!
Cure Heart: Precure Heart Shoot!
Marker Selfishe: Love! Love Loooooove!
Male Fans: Huh?
Gula: Cure Ace...
Leva: We won't go so easy on you next time.
Cure Diamond: Cure Heart!
Thank goodness, I'm so glad!
Cure Heart: Sorry to worry you...
Cure Sword: It's fine, we're just glad your back to your normal cheerful self...
Cure Rosetta: Indeed.
Cure Ace: This is no time to be celebrating.
Your ordeal has only just begun.
You will need to quickly ascend to the stage I am on.
I'll be waiting for you. Adieu!
Cure Heart: Cure Ace...
Cure Rosetta: Who on Earth is she?
{ED}
Preview
Makoto: I'm going to retire from being an idol.
I just can't handle singing anymore.{I heard だから、もう歌もたまんない。 Where たまんない is a slang form of たまらない, meaning "intolerable" or "unbearable". --K}
Mana: You can't quit singing, Makopi!
Okay! Starting Operation: Make Her Want to Sing Again!
Alice: I'm sure a full orchestra will work wonderfully.
Rikka: That'll just make it harder for her to sing.
Mana: Well then, if the Princess asks her to, I'm sure she'll sing.
Rikka: Huh? The Princess? What are you planning?
{\i1}DokiDoki! Precure:{\i0}
Next episode title: A Shock! Makopi's Idol Retirement Announcement!
Mana: Be still my beating heart!